Release Day Review by Mel: Of the Bauble by Debbie McGowan

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Off the Bauble, by Debbie McGowan
Publisher: Beaten Track Publishing
Release Date: December 15, 2016

Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2-of-5

summary

When nineteen-year-old Kieran O’Sullivan takes a trip to the attic for the Christmas decorations, it proves to be an illuminating experience.

Box includes:
– a hapless but not altogether helpless student
– a pedantic supernatural being (or two, or…well, quite a few)
– a funky older sister
– the coolest mum in the world
– a naughty rescue bunny and her easily led feline sidekick
– an insightful ex-girlfriend
– twinkle lights
– tinsel
– baubles

* Warning – may contain traces of magic and a smidgeon of social commentary (hey, it’s a book by Debbie McGowan – did you expect anything else?) *

Of the Bauble is a young adult, biromantic/non-binary fantasy romance.

tropes-tags
Biromantic Cis Male Character
Non-Binary Trans Character
Romance
Young Adult
Fantasy/Paranormal
Magic
Holidays (Christmas)
Humour

Review by Mel

Please be aware that this review contents mild spoilers.

Oh, how disappointing 😦

I’ve read one other book by the author and I really liked it. It was a historical romance and a full-length novel, so this holiday fantasy novella is something completely different but still. The beginning of the book was also really promising. I liked the protagonist Kieran and the whole set up with the genie Jinn in the attic was sweet and funny and I could see this becoming a lovely holiday romance.

Unfortunately, this book was not that.

I think what it comes down to is that Of the Bauble neither tells a convincing romance nor a fantasy action story, but rather failing at both. The love story isn’t developed in a way that I find captivating and, magic and all aside, fails to convince me of the protagonists’ eternal love. There is an insta-connection, which really is fine, but it doesn’t evolve from there, thus leaving me unbelieving and unsatisfied.

In the second half of the book, the focus shifts from the romance to adventure. Kieran and Jinn set out to free the other Jinns and, honestly, that was just silly. Not only must Kieran and Jinn depart, thinking they might never see each other again, it’s basically hopping from one place to the next, and from one event to another. Um, I skimmed a lot of this part, because it didn’t hold my interest and I was bored.

The world building in this book is shallow as well. The secondary characters remain superficial, even though it feels like the author was trying. They have, however, no real agency and feel like pieces thrown into the story to make it feel more whole.

I appreciate the diversity of the characters. Kieran is a cisgender biromantic male and Jinn a non-binary Jinn. But that is NOT enough to get me to like a book. I am all for diversity but, really, the rest of the book has to be good as well. I’ve read several books recently where this was not the case, that’s why I’m mentioning it. Additionally, there were at least two instances that made me doubt whether the portrayal was actually good, though. Because Kieran is curious, he is a bit impertinent in wanting to know what’s inside Jinn’s pants, only then realising that it doesn’t really matter. And Kieran’s ex-girlfriend suggests he should better tell his future boy- or girlfriends right away that he’s asexual, to maybe spare them both the trouble or something. Yeah. Both scenes feel off to me but I am neither ace nor trans, so I might not be the best judge of it.

So, all in all, I can’t really recommend this book. Hm.

more-from-author

debbie mcgowanI am an author, publisher and a social scientist. My academic specialism is gender and sexual politics and identity, so you can expect this to crop up now and then in my writing too! Not in an “in your face” kind of way – subtlety wins hearts and minds.

I write character-based/driven fiction – mostly general/contemporary, some (M/M, F/M, NB) romance and a bit of sci-fi fantasy (light). Basically, I write about life. I’ve written a few stand alone novels and short stories, but my main work is the Hiding Behind The Couch series, which these days I’m referring to as a literary soap opera.

Blog: De-blog

You can purchase Of the Bauble from:
Beaten Track Publishing
Amazon
All Romance eBooks

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I received an advanced copy of this novel in exchange for a fair and honest review.

4 thoughts on “Release Day Review by Mel: Of the Bauble by Debbie McGowan

  1. Just a thought…you could probably warn that there are spoilers in this review. It’s perfectly fine not to enjoy a book, but people need to know before you reveal things from the end of the story. (Full disclosure: I already read it, so I know where and when the plot points happen, which is how I know they are spoilers.)

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    • Thanks for pointing this out, AM. I will put a note on top of the review.

      I don’t know how that slipped through, since I usually try to pay attention to it. I guess it’s because I didn’t care that much for the book and the plot development—which is really no excuse.

      I’m sorry if anyone felt spoilered by this. I’ll try to do better in the future.

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  2. I’m a fan of Ms. McGowan’s book so I definitely suggest checking out something else by her. Her contemporaries are really good. The Seed of Tyrone series she co-writes with Raine O’Tierney are really good and worth a read. There are are some others of hers I suggest as well that the titles are escaping me. But if you liked the historical keep trying some of her other full length books.

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